Management - Tutors Comment Assessment Answer

Tutors comment: Here is my feedback on your draft Assignment 3. Pay attention to spelling, grammar and sentence construction. We picked up on a lot of errors. Basic writing errors. When using a name of a supermarket or company make sure to write the first letter of each word in caps. For example we won't be writing about pinu raja but rather about Pinu Raja. When defining a term say for example 'internal stakeholder' it is correct to refer to a definition as referred to in theory but I also need you to apply your own product design to that definition. Describe the stakeholders in your project that have similar characteristics as those describe in theory and explain why you have analysed it in such a way. Follow the instructions on the Assessment 3 guide that weposted last night and be careful to not include unnecessary information. Spacing between paragraphs are inconsistent and pay attention to the format in which I said headings and subheadings should be written in. Stakeholder Map - here you correctly refer to theory and then insert a stakeholder map that is too small to see and without and description of how it applies to your project. You do not even make any reference to this Figure and it's therefore considered useless information. You only follow Step 1 of the Stakeholder Analysis process and then skip to the Ecosystem Map without a clear prioritization of stakeholders or description on understanding the stakeholders. Again, look at the Ass 3 guide document. Remember that the benefits, disadvantages and recommendations discussion counts for 14 marks. Make sure that you include valuable information in this section. Some sections/discussions are rather long-winded and repetitive which makes it hard for the reader to follow and understand. Keep it clear and concise. I trust that the feedback provided will be helpful in finalising your assignment.